Elevator Pitch 3

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For this pitch I decided to use my laptop to record myself and stand in a different room. I perched the computer up on the counter and used the kitchen as my background to really play into the idea of my product and it's use! I designed it for people who often find their hands full with too much going on! The kitchen is where I envisioned my commercial (one day)! 

I still think I sound a little awkward but definitely better than before. My tone is more smooth and less choppy but I will always think I sound awkward!